Monday, April 25, 2016

Blog post: intro poetry reflection

What I think a poem should have is stanzas and emotions like sadness, happiness etc. poems also should hav short sentences which creates stanzas. A poem should not have a rithem like a song. What I notice that was different from Williams poem and Bradstreet was that Williams poems were smaller and Bradstreets poem was long. Williams poems talks about how someone ate plums and the other poem from Williams was about a red wheel barrow is all they need. What I noticed that was similar between them two was that they were poems. They also had imagery.

Monday, April 18, 2016

Blog: "When is there dignity in silence?"

Silence gives you dignity because if someone calls you names then they may stop talking because you kept silence.

Monday, March 14, 2016

Blog Fourteen: Thinking

 The parts that most interest me in The Giver was when Jonas had an idea of escaping so that he can spread all the memories to his community. And how The Giver said that he's not going with Jonas to elsewhere.

In my independent book (I Hunt Killers), the most interesting part was when Jazz (main character, a child of a serial killer) told G Williams (chief of the detectives) straight to his face that he (Jazz) is going to figure out  the crime (there was someone died and jazz want to figure it out) but G. Williams won't let her me but jazz won't quit to figure it out.

The part that most bothers me in The Giver was at the end where Jonas just calapsed from music or it may just have been an echo.

The part that most bothered me in my independent book (I Hunt Killers) was in the begining, when Jazz was hiding from all the cops in the crime scene, he was crawling away from the crime scene and hiding.

Thursday, March 10, 2016

Blog 13: Famous

I would rather be known during my life time and then after my death I'm unknown. I want to do this because if I'm unknown and die I can't and don't feel all the love and caring If I'm known during my life time I can and will feel all the love and caring.

Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Blog 12: legacy

I want to be know for having good grades and being a good student. I hope people remember who I was, how I accomplished having good grades. I hope People forget all the bad things I did. Like not participating during class sometimes. I hope I made this school (Freedom Middle School) know that it's possible and it has been done multiple times. I think I'm not really on the same track but I believe that I'm able to change.

Friday, March 4, 2016

Blog 11: Reaction

I can't believe that Jonas's dad injected something into the smaller baby and the baby passed away and Jonas found out and The Giver showed Jonas a recording of his dad injecting some sort of serum into the smaller baby. Jonas cried and was mad and his dad. I feel bad for the smaller baby and the bigger baby because then the bigger baby won't have a twin brother.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Blog 10: understanding

for me I feel like Jonas's community in his point of view seems a little messed up. I think this because in the text it says that The Giver and Jonas were talking about how the community is keeping secrets from the citizens. Between Our community and Jonas's community I think I'm better in our community because no one  wants things hidden from them.